In my first paper, my sentence wording was confusing at times. For example. my working about the history of enslavement was not always smooth. My diction explaining the “opposite parties’” views of women was also hard to follow. Professor Center suggested that for my “next paper work on reading your paper aloud in order to smooth out your wording.” When looking over my next paper I will use this advice and read it aloud in order to catch any poorly constructed sentences. I did well on making sure all of the words in my paper were spelled correctly as well as my use of commons.
